作文训练 六步 1+1 |
“1+1”指的是“图文并茂的书本 + 声像兼备的录像课程”， 这是本公司的特色， 也是我们给读者的爱心奉献! “六步”是指本册书及录像课程的作文训练思路，包括——
各位读者朋友， 希望您走进我们的书本， 走进我们的课堂！ |
“六步‘1+1’”——令您耳目一新！ 
第一步：请看一看——题目要求
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Chinese Composition 6-step ONE + ONE
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But once they are in Singapore, the high cost of living here, would mean we need to follow the local salary structure. |
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